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Rabu, 17 Februari 2010

Where Do I Spend My Whole Time at Home ?

Diposting oleh gregorius in paragraph writing

My room is a north-faced room with a window on other side. It's a small room. It wide is only 3x4 m. So, there are only a bed, a desk and a chair. It's not only small. It's also untidy.I seldom snug my books on my desk. Even, sometime when i wake up late, i don't fold the blanket. Moreover, I also hang many clothes on the wall. Puffs, how terrible it is!
With that view you can imagine how it smells. Or maybe you won't imagine it. It will be a really stinky smell. Nobody in my home will stay in my room for a long time. They can not get the fresh air there. Even, my mom likes sneezing when she enters my room.What a heckie room.
Maybe you're confused, how can I spend my whole time with that situation? Don't worry. There're only a brief description. However, I'm still care of my room. Every morning I open the window so the air can be circulated well. Sometime I also spray the air fresher to make it smells good. If I'm not in hurry, I always fold the blanket and clean the bed from dirt. How about the hanging clothes? My mother always puts them down if in 2 days I forget to wash them. Hehehhe...
Yeah, that's my room. Although it's not as big as yours, nor neat, I love it. Most of my spare time are spent there.

11 komentar:

Dii's blog mengatakan...

Room?

That's nice!!!

I love my room!!!

A place that we can do all of what we want to do..

Dii's blog mengatakan...

I'm still care is incorrect bob!

I still care is the correct one..

shin mazinger mengatakan...

faking rum..

precious aria mengatakan...

hahaha...
i can imagine how your room is...!!

^^

Paskalis mengatakan...

bob, be careful :p
"It wide is only 3x4 m" it should be its, right? it's just like My room not i room, isn't it?

"It's not only small. It's also untidy" you can just make it one sentence with not only...but also

remember what Ms. Yuseva said, try not to begin a sentence with conjunction like but, and, or. ;)

Lucia Nino Widiasmoro Dewati mengatakan...

Hei dude!!

You've told me about Punctuation. . .
Now, I'll give it back~~

hahaha. . .
Please be careful,dude!!

Keep Writing. . .


Please. .Don't forget to check my post and Leave ur comment. . .Let me know what ur think. .
Okay~~!!
See U soon!!

nana nini mengatakan...

adiiiit! haha. what a messy room :p
i suggest you to be 'lil bit clever cleaning your room, that's for your health :)

nice post ;)

Mutiara mengatakan...

There're only a brief description.
I think it should be There is ( if I'm not wrong -____- )

www.writewell.com mengatakan...

I also love my room so much, but it is always tidy and the smell is good, he he he.
It is a nice description...^_^

Ervina D_ny7 mengatakan...

hi Adit,,,,,,,,um,your sentence
"It wide is only 3x4 m." I think it should be Its wide is only 3x4 meters..
"sometime when i wake up late,, I think it should be SOMETIMES I wake up late.

nice posting, and have a nice day

Soniiia mengatakan...

hahhahahahah. . . . :D

>>idem ahh. . .<<

:D

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