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Rabu, 24 Februari 2010

How Would You Give It a Name ?

Diposting oleh gregorius in paragraph writing

There are several staircases in Sanata Dharma University. However, there is only one the most favorite. Which one is it?
It is located on the north part of Sanata Dharma University building. Exactly, it is near K.12 and K.10. It is in front of K.12 and beside K.10.
It becomes favorite because many people in PBI faculty spend their break time there. That is the only stairs which many people often sit on. Even, when there are no space to be sat on, many people sit on a space underneath the stairs. How crowded it is!
This situation will disturbs others. Because of that crowd, many people can't go upstairs and downstairs easily. It is also dirty because it becomes a big ashtray - people who are smoking throw the ash there. It is nasty stairs, isn't it?
I don't know how it becomes favorite. May be because it is located on the strategic way - where many people walk around there. May be it will be more popular if it has a name. How would you give it a name ?

13 komentar:

Unknown mengatakan...

Your writing is good, however please don't be a minimalist. You can write more on describing the place. There are still many things that can be included here.

Please check your grammar, especially in this sentence:
"However, there is only one the most favorite."

cheers

Paskalis mengatakan...

yeah, Mr. Chosa is right dit :) don't be a minimalist, you can't describe it more obvious if you try :d

we call that place as "DOWNSTAIR"

shin mazinger mengatakan...

hell stair..

Phita mengatakan...

stairs..??

nice post..^^

Dii's blog mengatakan...

I think there isn't PBI faculty in Sanata Dharma University Dit!!

I'm agree with Mr.Chosa, I think, you have to revise it because it sounds awkward bob!!

However, nice posting!

"The Downstairs", hahaha!

GabRieeL mengatakan...

adit..
i am sure that your favorite place is stair.. am i right???

Lucia Nino Widiasmoro Dewati mengatakan...

Hahahhaaaa. . .

Dit~~

our discussion last night about uncountable n countable~~~wkwkwkwkwkwk

Now. .It do confuse me~~~


RRRRRRRRRR~~~

please tell me if you already have the answer. . .

Anyway. . .Where is ur comment for my post??

hahhaaa. . .

Thanks
See u soon!

Mutiara mengatakan...

stair to heaven :P

Nickolas mengatakan...

I thing the suitable name should be "The Darkness Stairs"
hahahaaa... :D

I was a little bit surprise when saw you writing, that's too short.. hehehee...
Next time you have to revise it..

Nice writing! ^^

Soniiia mengatakan...

hmmmmm. . ..

why do you like that place? ? ?


hmmmmmm :D


keep writing ^^v

nana nini mengatakan...
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brigita_oye mengatakan...

emmmmm....is it stairs????


nice post

nana nini mengatakan...

adiiit ;)
I know that place, hehehe..

umm.. I think PBI is not faculty.. am I right?

This situation will disturbs others. The word will usually followed by verb 1 without s/es, is it right? ;)

and.. the word "may be". Is it separated?

hehe...

nice post! :) *too short* :p

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